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October 05, 2006
Poetry: REVOLUTION
By: Chase Martin
I will change this God-forsaken place
I will have no fear and show my face
I will take this journey
And not relent til im carried off on a gurney
Ill take my dream for PEACE, and find a piece
A piece of tranquility for all
Where Freedom can trully ring
And once again the people can sing
Ill stop this Governments tyranny and facist ways
By bringing our people out of this foggy haze
Ill stand up againt the biggest power of them all
And tear down this governments wall
People we NEED a REVOLUTION
By bringing back to life our CONSTITUTION
This man will continue to dream
Until our country is all on the same team
It is our Responsibility to fight for what is right
And these dreams are so within sight
No more disgrace of our flag
With some WEAK ASS price tag
Lets lay down the sword
And show once and for all why we are the greatest country in the World!
Posted by i220 at October 5, 2006 10:03 AM
Comments
Bold bold statements my friend,
But, will you be able to deliver in the end?
You say that you want to bring back tha constitution,
But, then you say that you want everyone in the same institution.
"On tha same team" - sounds like communism,
Could lead to a social aneurysm.
If FREEDOM is truly your mantra...
Then you best be ready for some serious contra -
Diction, friction, 'cause we all got our own opinions,
And THAT is the right of the billions,
Of souls than inhabit the earth.
So discussion is the only way...
For what it's worth.
YaaaAAAAa Booiiyyyyyy.....
LOL!
Free
Posted by: M.C.Free at October 6, 2006 01:22 PM
Free you taunt my words with gleam
If only you would use that mind to dream
You silly man..
Communism is what im trying to Ban
And dont speak to me as if I want an institution
All I thrive for is a little Restitution
Restitution for the people like you and me
Dont be worried about some friction free
Friction and Opinions go hand in hand
And thats exactly what our people need in order to make a stand
And your totally right free "discussion is the only way."
Thats why people like me and you can save the day.
Enjoyed your lyrics free
hope i helped you see!
Chase Martin
Posted by: Chase Martin at October 7, 2006 12:49 PM
OhhhHHHHhhhhh....
And we have a lyrical battle worth something. :)
Naiiiiice.
I'm gonna concede THIS time 'cause you spit truth my friend and on this topic I can't be tha devil's advocate.
Tha revolution is here and now and we just have to do our best to hold on.
Free.
Posted by: M.C.Free at October 10, 2006 11:40 AM