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November 03, 2005
Poetry by Cara: my once exquisite rose
a single rose
once crimson and vibrant with life
but the winds of fate have changed their direction
thus my beautiful flower began to wither away
i tried to water and revive her back to life, but her thorns were
too piercing
i dyed her black, alas only this would do her justice
as the now death hued petals fall from her
i'll shed a single tear for what was once my exquisite rose...
Copyright 2005: Cara.
Posted by i220 at November 3, 2005 11:13 PM
Comments
Cara. Thanx for all your werk. I will post it frequently so keep checking back. Really liked the feel of this one. Has that melancholy and detatched feeling. I like the no caps no punctuation style also. Angel uses that alot too. It gives the werk an impromptu feeling :)
Big Love.
Posted by: i220 at November 3, 2005 11:28 PM
thanks dearie..yeah i dont do punctuation usually and my spelling is terrible..so idk. i have some kinks to work out in all my work. but you're great! love ya!
.peace.love.thought.
-cara-
Posted by: cara at November 3, 2005 11:37 PM
cara, so happy to see your beautiful prose here, this is a good place to be. !220 a dear friend and a really cool dude. can't wait to read more of your poetry.
angel
Posted by: ANGEL at November 4, 2005 04:33 PM